Rain

As it pours down from

the Heavens, it dampens

the brightly coloured earth

and makes it even brighter.

The trees, the flowers,

the bushes... they rejoyce.

They have been nurished yet

again. And at the end of each

storm...an arch of colours

form above the new land.

Forever reminding us, of that

single promise that He has made...

and is determined to keep <3

Reviews

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

Beautifully penned, peaceful write. I love the rain.

[Aka_Kitsune]

a simple poem with much meaning behind it. great job

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A fierce and simple piece that stands alone, well done, good read.

[Shy Girl]

This was a very nice poem...liked the simple concept that began the piece and you grew from there...wonderful (I for one love the sound of the pattering of rain on the skylights in my kitchen) Thank you for sharing this poem:)

[Victorious]

Dear megan brooks,

Hmmm, simple, yet complex. This poem reminds me the beauty of this temporary land and adds a depth to my senses. I loved how you described the reactions of the nourishing, beautiful rain.

My favorite line is "And at the end of each/storm...an arch of colours/ form above the new land," because it reminds me of how life is. After every storm, there's always a rainbow.

Wonderful write. Thank you for sharing.

Sincerely Livana Lowell (LL)

God bless

[Angelic Surrender]

This is wonderful :)

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the poem. Rain can heal the earth and bring life back in the Spring. Description and story made the poem a pleasure to read. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[SuicidePact.]

awww

[Rae Emeral]

I love it. This creates such a beautiful picture in my mind! Wonderful poem. :) Plus the little bit of truth at the end makes it even more beautiful.

[J. J. Nightingale]

How beautiful .. The Rainbow .. The Promise .. This is so good .. You have talent, and a heart ...

Jasmine ..