Fourth of July <3

Fourth of July <3

A Poem by Drowning with Stars

Don't you hate it when you get a glimpse of something great
And then all too soon it slips away?
I got a little preview of you and me
But we never got a chance to be
That's one Fourth of July I'll never forget
The way it felt with my head on your chest
And your fingers laced through mine
They fit so perfectly, as if it was God's very design
You brought out a side of me
That even I had never before seen
I wonder where we'd be right now
If I'd never had to leave that town
It didn't last long enough to make it hard to leave behind
And yet I still think of the day that you were almost mine

© 2011 Drowning with Stars


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"as if it was God's very design" I loved that idea, it was so beautiful. I liked how this was just one moment in time, or one night rather, but it still remained in thoughts.

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is so sweet and beautiful and sad. Great job.
Just remember, everyone back home still loves you

Posted 12 Years Ago



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