wishing

Wishing you were here with me
Wishing all the tears would cease
Wishing that my life was great
Wishing i wasn't on repeat

They've come they've gone
They've gone abroad
They've torn my heart
They've left me unsorted

My lifes been short
And full of sorrow
My lifes been hell
And full of caring
My lifes been bad
And full of lessons

Wishing you were here with me
Wishing we were cuddling
Wishing we were still together
Wishing id quit dreaming this dream i am dreaming

Author's Note

my life is one of hard knocks as i have 4 children and a fifth do now any day
there are 3 baby mamas but only one truly holds my heart. I seem to repeat myself over and again falling in love and having children, im hoping one day to settle down and raise my family

Reviews

[Judas Hammer]

nice piece. I like the flow. GJ

[StayAnchored]

This is a very touching piece... You have a wonderful talent, my dear friend! :)

[Silhouette]

As I read this, my heart twisted violently in my chest. I cold really feel the pain and longing in your words and I hope you get your wish someday. Great write, as always :)

[Blue Lotus]

In life you go through many changes.... some lessons in life can be very challenging.
Who knows what tomorrow brings..keep your head up and you might be surprised.

PS: Enjoyed it :-)