Depressing Awakening

i lay beside you lost in my dream
you lay beside me cuddling
i wake up happy from blissful dreams
then realise it was all fantasy
there was no kids or wedding ring
there was no house or kitty
there was only u lying next to me
my arms wrapped around you cuddling
no baby in belly no ring on hand
just you and me trying to work things out
why do dreams have to be so depressing

Reviews

[The Kat]

This was interesting for me...because the flow and words made me feel calm, and relaxed...yet the word "depressing" just reversed all of those feelings. not in a bad way. I liked it. it shows how everyone reads something differently, at times, and especially it can be totally different for the writer. I liked reading it.

[Acer]

Nicely written.

[Siliousneo]

thank you =) it was written at a point in my life i was happy yet depressed about how things were going

[Acer]

Thanks you've described it, because i was just trying to ask you that from where you'd got that idea.

[Siliousneo]

np =) part of the dream has come true =) we have a kid on the way =) only we are not together anymore. im sure ill be writting some poetry about it sooner or later

[Acer]

yeah...you'll. You should have to write something more about it, i'd really like to read them all.

[Silhouette]

Dreams are an unconsious way to warn you something is wrong. They will never harm u but warn u. Very heart-felt piece well done :)

[Acer]

I agree with you.