faith

The world has come to take my soul

Will God be there to tell them no

Ive learned to live my life in fear

Thats why i  keep my God and freinds near

I have sinned and sought forgiveness

so that one day I may pass through

the gates of heaven

I often cry myself to sleep

Because of the challenging path i seek

I pray for those that feel there weak

and ask God that they taste no defeat

for in our god lies our true strength

Reviews

[Simply Meag]

this is absolutely lovely. so much truth in it. so much heart.

[Augusta]

I can see myself in your poem, crazy sad. Directly from your heart. It touched my soul!!!

[CreativeStroke]

"I pray for those that feel there weak" 'there' should be 'they're' :)
I really enjoyed this poem... it is so true that God is always there to provide.

[StayAnchored]

I love this poem! God will always provide :)

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. A great remorse and asking for forgiveness are the bedrock of moving towards God. May He always be your friend...:)

[Silhouette]

It really touched my heart and soul, made tears come to my eyes :'( so sad and heartfelt, good write about God helping us out, though.