when i met you

about an ex hurting me and me finding a new love

I had a life, now I've died

The second kid wasn't mine

Will I ever trust another, They've

all lied. Yet I'm with someone

that makes me feel alive. Is she

like the rest, or it is for the best?

I will never know until I'm told,

until then I am dead.

Reviews

[Riley Bray]

I think this is a very nice poem. Like Sami said, questions in poems are a very cool aspect and you put them in flawlessly. The only thing I have to say is it gets a tad bit choppy, but still, bravo.

[Sami Khalil]

" I'm with someone
that makes me feel alive. Is she
like the rest, or it is for the best?"
I like questions in a poem and those are good ones...:)

[Silhouette]

I can tell that you are afraid of what the future may hold…it is full of surprises, and your poem makes me wonder. Excellent.