love

love

A Poem by Siliousneo
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loves lessons,written because of recent love lost

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Love is fine, but it hurts so much

the price you pay is hi,so if i can choose between life or

death I think i,d choose to die.

So when i say dont fall in love, you'll be

hurt before your through you.

You see my freind I ought to know

I fell in love with you

© 2012 Siliousneo


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Loving the right person would be just wonderful.
Love is art too & act of loving can be artistry.
waiting for the this Love would be worth the pain too.

Posted 11 Years Ago


It's true, love can hurt a lot, but it can feel amazing, too when with the right person. At the one line when you said "the price you pay is hi, so if i can choose between life or" i think you ment "high" other than that, it was well done.

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Siliousneo
Siliousneo

Williams, MN



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Im a father of four with a history most people judge me the wrong way simply cause of my past all im trying to do is get by hope you like what i have to put down here as they are things ive felt over .. more..

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