Perfection

I had to write something for a class in school, this is what I came up with in about ten minutes at four in the morning. Thank you insomnia?

I’ve found the infection,

In a divine selection,

Indicated where perfection,

Is relative to perception.

Perceive your reflection,

Jump start the recollection,

And gather a collection of memory.

Because perfection cannot be

Identical for you and me,

If we base it upon what we see.

Memory is the basis of what we make

And visions of the past, they cannot take.

They’ll try to make us see at the same level

But they’ll find imperfection is inevitable.

And maybe they’ll stop the chaos and realize

What I once found with my own eyes;

This infection,

Festering through the divine selection.

Though maybe, this is just my perception.

Reviews

[Arsh]

Nice flow of ink. I think, you were on break... I meant, it's a very long time since you were on here. . . Ah! 2011-2014.. long difference. Anyway, glad to have a creative writer back. Yet we don't know each other much, hopefully... we'd get to know... , but would like to welcome back. So, "welcome back to this site, Meaghan". This site needs such writers alike you.

Keep writing!

[Meaghan]

Arsh, thanks for your reviews! They're helpful confidence boosters! I'll be sure to go check out some of your writing :)

[Arsh]

I`m even honored to read your work, Meaghan. You write with your heart and just speak through the transparency of your cold-spirit. Me too`d be looking forward to checking out new updates from you ;)

[Meaghan]

Just saw this. Thank you so much! I always appreciate your reviews :)

[Jeff]

Great flow, and I love the rhyme scheme.

[Tim Lion]

flows well. very interesting. perfection is based on perception, and perception is based on the self of the perceiver. I like it!