Some of us

Some of us;

We just grow up a little too quick,

No chance to be naïve,

We just want to spread our wings and leave.

Some of us;

We just grow up a little too slow,

Still stuck in the box, like a mime.

Ready to let you know, we still have time.

Some of us;

We just don’t grow up at all,

It’s all just a game,

We climb to the top knowing we’ll fall.

Some of us;

We just don’t know what we are,

We’re colorful and bright, but then bland as the tar.

Some of us;

We’re not happy or sad,

We’re just in between,

and that makes us glad.

I;

Well I am not one,

I am simply all,

For my life, has just begun.

Reviews

[Arsh]

"Some of us;
We’re not happy or sad,
We’re just in between,
and that makes us glad... "

The above lines've got some kinda deep worth-reading themselves. I admit, the choice of words's always seemed impressive... to your stuffs. Enjoyed reading your work!

[Akshat♥]

awesome poem ..i liked a lot..
short and sweet poem..
describes interesting things..
you have plenty of time to begin:)
this is definitely going to my favorites ..

[highthought]

some truth about life, i' ll read it again

[Raven]

It was inspiring, in my opinion, and I liked it.

[Shardbearer99]

This sort of reminds me of having to do one of those "Who am I?" essays for homework when I was in school for English. I really like the fluidity and the wording was very done. Very enjoyable, well done on creating a lovely poem