A few last words

Okay, I was really angry when I wrote this, so it's a bit harsh, and not too well written.

You’re unappreciative, and selfish, and you need to get that straight.

You play people, you deceive them, along with other things I hate.

You smile, and it brings light to my dark day.

And somehow, you always know the right thing to say.

You know me better than anyone does.

And you see me for who I am, not what I was.

I hate it, I love you, and that’s not how it’s supposed to be.

Because it’s always going to be you, her, and me.

You’re too self centered and naïve.

It makes me wonder whether or not you’d care if I leave.

My notion is no, but I know you’ll say yes.

Then you’ll tell me that without me you’re nothing but a mess.

As true as that is, you wouldn't mean what you’ve said.

Do you realize that makes me feel like I’m better off dead?

If you would just stop, and look at what you’ve done.

Maybe you’d realize I’m not the only one.

That you’ve hurt so bad, and played like a game.

Maybe you’d realize that to the other girls you’ve done the same.

I know you don’t mean to do it, that you don’t mean any harm.

You win every girl over with your good looks and your charm.

But have you ever thought to stop doing it to me?

That I’m more than just a girl you play, or do you not see?

I know everything about you, from your head to your toes.

We’ve shared secrets that no one else knows.

We’ve sat, and we’ve cried together about all that isn’t right.

You’ve said I’m your best friend, you love me, and then held me for the night.

I know what you want, and how to give it to you.

But you don’t even want me, and you know that it’s true.

You’re selfish, and wicked, and I love you so much.

You’re careless and fake, and I crave your smooth touch.

But I’m not just some girl you can throw to the side.

Or just a b***h along for the ride.

You act like I’m not good enough, to be worn on your arm.

That I mean less than a bracelet, or it’s little charm.

I love you, I hate you, but now, I want nothing to do with your lies.

I missed you, I needed you, you could see it in my eyes.

But the fact is, I could treat you better than any girl you know.

But now I’m done blocking the door hoping you don’t go.

So say goodbye to my heart, to my touch, to my kiss.

Say goodbye to the orgasms, I know that’s all that you’ll miss.

Reviews

[Raven]

Wow. That was... amazing. I don’t think there’s a right word for this. Depicting the ways of life and love, and that even the slightest of guys are blind (metaphorically speaking.)

[Shardbearer99]

That was really good. Thoroughly enjoyable. It flowed very nicely and you have a great way with words. You're a talent to definitely watch out for. Could you possibly check out my story Dark Destinies? Thanks.

[Jeff]

Love always has two sides. This is a very emotional piece.