Pictures of a Frozen War

Bone chiling

Pictures of a Frozen War

Numb…

That’s how I feel

I was almost there

Almost, but then you changed

Or I changed, it doesn’t really matter

You swore you’d be there

Forever and ever

Where

Are

You

?

 

 

Cold…

That’s what you are

You sit across from me

Making small talk, killing time

Your frigid, cold and devoid of emotion, soulless

You attack me with ice daggers

I miss your warmth

Need your love

What

Happened

To

Us

?

 

Reviews

[The Purple Kazoo]

i think you have a typo: "Your frigid, cold and devoid of emotion, soulless" should probably be "You're frigid..." common mistake, no biggie. i love the way the last few lines in each stanza get their own line. it's like a ritardando in music, and emphasizes the main idea of the poem. nice write.

[Poeticpiers]

Love is fragile plant , it withers and dies without nurturing

[jumbie's #1 fan]

ooh, ice queen got mad skills