Chains

Chains

A Poem by Save the Trees, Save the World

I feel chained

Chained down

You never make a sound

Those cold eyes

They freeze my insides

Being with you

Is walking on thin ice

I'm bound to fall

 

Chorus:

So why can't I leave

Brake away from you and this

I can't do it anymore

I'm falling way to fast

I won't survive this crash

 

You're going to be

The death of me

You broke me down

And drug me all around

There are memories I can't kill

And wounds that just won't heal

These tears I've cried

Haven't dried

And I'm dying tonight

 

Chorus:

So why can't I leave

Brake awai from you and this

I can't do it anymore

I'm falling way to fast

I won't survive this crash

 

 

© 2008 Save the Trees, Save the World


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Ooh, lyrics! I really like them, your word choice is good and simple, not too fussy. There are a few spelling/typing errors but nothing major! I'd love to read more of this, it would look nice on my iPod :)

Posted 16 Years Ago


Those memories that we cannot kill, kill us. We try to drown them away, we try throw them down and run away, we try to escape them desperately needing for there to be a way. We cannot kill them, but they will do everything they can to kill us.

Posted 16 Years Ago


it was good sad but good

Posted 16 Years Ago


I liked this although i think that you could make it i bit longer or should. just my opinion. This has a good feel to it when read out loud.

Posted 16 Years Ago


very emotional write I like the chorus, it really adds to the piece. It is a brutal piece of emotion but I like it very much.
Great write.
Kates

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on June 28, 2008
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