drift with me

A haunting wish

Lets drift away together
You and I
One mind together
My love.
And breathe
one breath
Into each other
Oh my love, my love
Lets drift away together

Floating up into the dream
Out of painful reality
Lets go away
For a while

Don't let go of my hand!
I might fall in, into the quicksands!
They make you sink far away
Farther and farther from the way
Don't let go of my hand
I might fall into the hurting lands
Where people can't scream or laugh or cry
And I don't want to be one of them
They who just hang their heads and sigh

Come away...
Underwater.
Where screaming sounds like laughing
On a watery summer day
The faded colors
The bright light and smiles
They may be fake
But at least they don't cry
as they burn at stake

Lets drift away
You and I
Into a new place
Of mind.
And let's float away
From the lands of dying children and
Lets be holding hands

Author's Note

So yeah, here it is...
Any comments and critiques? I would really love some, thanks.

Reviews

[John Ryan]

this sounds like lyrics do a song

very very well done!

[Maia]

thankyou sir