Rainy Days

how i feel

The rainy days

inside my head

they make my heart

feel like lead.

And rainy days

inside my head

make me dull,

numb, pretend.

And there is rain

inside my mind

it never stops,

never once.

scream into space

inside my mouth

scream into space,

no sound comes out.

oh god im scared

of time run out

and god im scared

of words i cant shout

running here

running there

running in depths of despair

counting once

counting twice

counting seconds 

as they pass by

the rainy days 

inside my mind

they take me down

they make me drown

and i cant let myself be found

Author's Note

Tell me how you felt after reading this.

Also, I suggest you read this out loud in a whisper. Just whisper it to yourself out loud. It changes the whole poem.

I was shaking as I wrote this.

Reviews

[Cid]

"scream into space
inside my mouth
scream into space,
no sound comes out."
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Brilliant stanza! :)
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Yes, Me too screamed this poem onto my mind when I was reading this because the rhyme, the flow everything you've hold very awesomely and which makes the poem awesome reading ... It's seemed like a rap song which I love the most to heart .. and I won't consider this as a poem but as a song...an awesome song that makes my day. Once again am glad to read your new stuffs. Your awesome at writing, Maia ...your talent in rhyme's pretty impressive and your this new poem's became my fav. one because me too love rain, storms and cold weather to the heart ... so, this poem's my fav. one and I'd love to rate this poem ... 100/100! :)

[Maia]

Thankyou so much Cid!!! Once again, you have brilliantly reviewed one of my poems :)

[Cid]

Hey! Hi! :)
How are you today??
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O' by the way, your welcome! Lol

[Maia]

I'm doing fine, thankyou very much, how are you? :)

[Cid]

Am very well, Maia, thanks for asking! Am feeling good now!
Well, Maia, do you still remember you'd suggested me a few couple of hours earlier to write some "Epics" together???

[Maia]

Aboslutely!!

[Cid]

Great!
Your awesome and you can't believe but it's true that i've devoted my enough time making my first Epic poem so, Am still not sure that's an Epic one or not but I wrote to make you smile because after all, it's your suggestion and I couldn't break your heart because you wanted to read my Epic one too so, I made for you :)
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Well...so, please take a look there and make my that poem more beautiful with your scent dear, Maia ...
Here's a title of my that Epic poem "HEART GOES TO SING!" :)
I HOPE YOUR GONNA LOVE THAT! :)
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Your awesome, Maia! :)

[Maia]

Thankyou