Questioning my everything

Questioning my everything
It is everything
Everything
Im so scared
Scared,
Questioning my everything
This is how it seems to me

In a deep breath
It all begins to change
Nothing here
And nothing gained
Just lying here
In my-self shame
Self regret set me free
The Anticipation is
Is Killing me
All I see is perfect painted pictures
Obscuring all that I know
Its all I see
Is their perfect painted scenery
Illusions are all that I know

It is everything, everything
Everything
I miss my everything

This is how it seems to be
As your waves Crash over me
Pulling me under
Get me out alive
I want to live
With enough time to turn this around
Ill stand till the end
No one has to know
No one has to know
My eyes closed shut
Focused on what is ahead
Ill stand till the end
Ill take this on my own



It is everything
Everything
Im so scared
Scared,
Questioning my everything

Redesign my everything��������
As if they will never know

Reviews

[FaithfullyJennyBear]

This is a good poem :)
The imagary is very good, and you used a lot of emotive words which is also awesome :)
good poem

[Meher Saigol]

great one which many can relate to :)

[theunionisloud]

Agony in action. We've all been there, but this feels like the internal narration our past once spoke while we were deaf.

I love the desperate glimmer of hope at the end.

[Nobody.]

this piece aches outloud. you really laid the emotions ut on the table here. well done.
cheers!
R.G.

[An owl on the moon]

This one just pulls you into that pool.. the dark depths of the unknown.. the fears of anticipation. Brilliantly confessed.

[stellasautelle]

I like the emotions in this.. nice flow to it too :)

Wow. Questioning always happens to the best of us, including doubting ourselves. Hopefully you'll find the answers, like Fayiza said, but just remember. Although it's good to question ourselves, questioning every move you make is pretty unhelpful

[Fayiza]

I like your poem!
Questioning is one of my interests too!
Although I'm from east and It's a long distance between us but I can underestand you very well!
I hope you find the answers!