Goodbye To All I know

i say goodbye
running away, from all i know
i couldnt hear the things they say
a whisper,
vibrates across the room
let alone a goodbye
im running away from all i know
is this because of my sin?
saying goodbye to all thats good
nooo
dont rip my heart out and put it back again
i cant take any more of this
take my heart, take it quick
and steal my life away

let them jam the thorns in me
deep enough to touch the skull
with blood stained eyes i cannot see
i am running away from all i know
take the pain, go away
leaving my pain of yesterday

don't rip out my heart and put it back again
im running away from all i know
is this because of my sin?
i say goodbye to all that i am
will you know me in the end?

go ahead
rip my heart out and put it back again
yeaah
i can take this
giving up the world
its all for you
will i be worth the sin?

let them jam the thorns in me
its ok, take my life
let them watch me bleed
i suffer
so i may live again
i will know you in the end
goodbye to all i know

Reviews

[Writer CW Kirkland]

This is an effective poem with a strong message. I am not a deeply religious person, but I thought your writing was touching and emotional. It is easy to read because of a smooth flow, but it also encourages the reader to ponder the message. I think your writing can appeal to a large audience. Thank you for sharing your writing with The Cafe. I look forward to reading more.