storm warning

There's a storm warning!

and she's blowing through town

like a tornado that demolishes my heart.

There's a Storm Warning!

what else can I do?

 

 

She rains down her mighty rain

causes flooding in my brain

no meteorologist could have saved me

from this hurricane queen.

with each strike she breaks me down

I'm barely off my knees

There's a storm warning!

I think she has it out for me.

Finally the eye passes over

giving me a chance to flee

but there's a storm warning!

I think she's coming back for me.

Reviews

[Raven's Soul]

I'm not sure why, but I was giggling through this. I actually found it very amusing. It reminds me of the battle scene in Pirates of the Caribbean 3. Good job on this. I didn't see anything I'd change within this piece.