Perspective

Perspective

A Poem by Loner

How irrelevant

it may seem regarding love

when pettiness gnaws.

© 2008 Loner


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This makes me think of jealousy when there's no reason to be jealous. Lovely job Michael :-*

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It is a nice senryū. Caging something like love with only seventeen words is a challenge to say the least. You have done it well. At least on face of it at any rate.

Good job.

Posted 16 Years Ago

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 Added on May 13, 2008

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Loner
Loner

Where the tumbleweeds blow along a vapid and dusty canvas, CA



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