numb

i'm becoming numb. i can't feel the pain. i can't feel the hate. since you've been gone my world has become what i want. you're not here. i am who i am. no pretending. past behind me, future before me. i'm not gonna stop living, no. this is just the beginning. i have my dreams, and your not in them. i'm becoming numb to the pain. becoming numb to the hate. isn't it great? i'm not pretending. my eyes don't lie, my feelings don't hide. im not gonna stop living, no. i'm becoming numb.

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[Jessica{is inspired by ..]

You might want to go through this and just fix the grammer a little, it's somewhat distracting from the piece. It's a good concept though. Many people can relate to the feeling of being/becoming numb, but still living. Unfortunatly, it doesn't quite feel like living when you can't feel anything. It's a nasty cycle.

Overall, it's a good idea, just clean it up a little.

Jess