angels words

story of a angel who's soul is finally alive even though her body is dead.

it took for my body to die

for my soul to live.

 

must we all die

to appreciate life?

 

if i had the chance should i do my life over?

or would it not be my life?

 

would it have been a dream.

a life belonging to someonelse?

 

we make decisions.

they make us.

 

i made my decision.

Reviews

[PoetryXpressions]

Decisions are life lessons ...needed for us to grow. Well penned write. Thanks for sharing

[Kayla]

This is such a creative piece of writing. You really turned to each side of the solution. Great Job!

[Wesley D. Stein]

Interesting. Is the last line supposed to be there and crossed out? If so, this is a magnificent peice. I took from it that you are not dead yet, but you chose to live your life as if you could be at any moment- this is very wise. Good job.