Breathe Deeply

Just a Christian's inspirational scribble. :)

Breathe deeply,

Take it in,

For the world knows not where you have been.

Love truly,

And with honest heart,

For only God knows each man’s part.

Dream broadly,

Far and wide,

For life is more about the ride.

Give freely,

And hold nothing back,

For not even the flowers lack.

Pray intently,

At the throne,

Where none can hear but God alone.

And hope always,

Do not despair,

For the Father above hears each man’s prayer.

Author's Note

I'm still working on it. This was kinda just a quick-scribble rough draft.
But, as always, I'd appreciate anything you have to say!

Reviews

[13ReasonsWhy]

This made my eyes water and I tasted salt.... I am speechless.

[MsMermaid]

I don't know if you completed this after posting the unfinished work, but this looks finished to me as it stands. I didn't get to see a Papyrus font though. Just the typical font. But I remember my sister setting up beautiful pages for our poetry group with gorgeous scrolling fonts but when it came out on our public domain group there were no fancy fonts on the pages. We were disappointed. Anyway, this work is powerful and awe filling.

[The Scholar]

Haha thanks. It's called papyrus I think.

[Tai Ryens]

Yeah, it does seem to be missing a small piece in the end. Sounds great at the moment! I loved every word of it, shame it isn't finished though. Great job!
Oh yes, and ps. What font did you use for this write? I absolutely loved it! Haha.