The Break Up

The Break Up

A Poem by mcceewrites

I wish you could watch me from the outside looking in. 
I wish we could remain lovers, 
But start as strangers again.
Because you've lost your politeness. 
You barely even listen to me when I speak. 
You wanna have it your way.
But it's my way or the highway.
In the middle is where I've always wished to meet. 

But, I love you so much that it drives me off a cliff. 
I'm holding on for dear life, 
To you, through whom I live. 
I can't let you go.
I can't go on without you.
But, I need to know...
Would you still love me if I did?

I can't live without you, 
I'll throw myself off the cliff.
You're the only one I love, 
But you're getting harder to kiss. 
I'll never let you go, 
But, I need to know...
Would you still trust me if I did?

Would you still love me if I broke up with you?
Would you still trust me if I did the one thing I said I'd never do?
Would you still view me as the woman you adore?
Would you still love me if I said I couldn't do this anymore?

If I said, 
I still love you, but I don't love you anymore.

© 2020 mcceewrites


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always seems to be the best at the beginning of a relationship...acceptance for who we are, loved for that, appreciated, not taken for granted....and then it starts...the little things, the trying to change each other.
so sad that that happens...
j.

Posted 4 Years Ago


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mel
o0o0o0ohhhh that is great! I love the questions and the ending!

Posted 4 Years Ago


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mcceewrites

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much, Mel!
always seems to be the best at the beginning of a relationship...acceptance for who we are, loved for that, appreciated, not taken for granted....and then it starts...the little things, the trying to change each other.
so sad that that happens...
j.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on April 4, 2020
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Tags: heart, heartbreak, break-up, broken, heartbroken, love, relationship, feelings

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mcceewrites
mcceewrites

Atlanta, GA



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Instagram: _mccee; I am an aspiring screenwriter. I enjoy writing lyrics, poetry, and I have self-published one novel. As an Aries, I have trouble finishing my other novels! I love reading other write.. more..

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