Circlet Sierra

I have flown above the clouds,

And I have seen great wonders.

I have stared into the eye of God

And dueled Death to his end.

I am respected by the Mountains and

Feared by the Sea.

But I will be forever imperfect

Until I wear the sapphire of your eye

On a necklace ‘round my neck.

I will make you a

Diadem of my bronze skin and

We will live together in a palace of colors.

Harmony,

My sprightly ricochet,

Will come when we sing together again.

 

Reviews

[inconsistentsea]

This flows beatifully. I especially like the last three lines. The imagery is epic and I think you did a good job of portraying emotion, considering the subject.