prisoner on her

She is locked away

but...... 

still has some freedom

 

the urge to leave and to fly

is a must

but sadly..

 

she is a prisoner in her own home

Author's Note

this i cant describe i have never felt the need to write this so short poem it came to me like a flash of the wind and i had to

Reviews

[David E Navarro]

Nicely done, intriguing, a vivid image of a common reality.

[EMF]

And I am so glad you wrote it. It is stunning. In a few lines you have encapsulated isolation. Stunning work

[Poetic Beauty]

this to me sounds like extreme anxiety that takes over a person's life locking them inside their own personal comfort zone.

[J Todd Underhill]

I have often thought this own thing about my mother in her last decade of life. I found more and more out about how things were since she passed and I think you summed things up pretty well for her personal situation.

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

We all feel like prisoners at one time or another...
and sometimes can't escape it...
something prevents it...
terrific write :)

[SilentDreamer]

Short and strong.

[Coyote Poetry]

Many people are prisoners. Hard to escape when the wall are impossible to climb and escape. The eyes can tell the real story of a woman locked away in fear and sadness. A powerful poem with a strong message. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote