Nameless

The feelings you send me the wish of us never happening

N for the things will Never know about me
A for the Actions you Accuse me of
M for the Meaningless things you say
E for Everything & anything i hate about you

L for the Love we used to know
E for Every piece of my heart you broke
S for the Signs i Should have Saw
S the Sight of you brings my tears

your name
I never want to recall
the sadness it sends
over whelms me

leave me in peace
leave me with my shards
leave me and never look back
think of me when you love your lover

Author's Note

i wrote this, one rainy day, thought it would be good enough to put on here thanks so much for the reviews

Reviews

[David E Navarro]

Great emotions conveyed, I liked the acrostic section, I like the power and punch of this one.

You missed some words and could use a good grammar and syntax edit. That would have taken this good poem and made it even better.

You write well, so take care to use the medium of our craft, words and language, well and you will garner some serious attention.

[Sakib]

I liked the structure here. It expresses your feelings nicely. Nice write.

[Coyote Poetry]

A poem with a good flow and a very good story. I like the use of the two words. The poem was direct and strong. I like the ending. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Dove]

Love the emotion showed here. Excellant poem

[stars are far]

It is so nice
i really loved the emotions that you are showing :)

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Excellent format and emotions here....this is real good, has a real bite to it that I get when I read, awesome!!!