my dear sweet love:) <3

the reasons i love you:) <3 the way i love you the way you are seen in my eyes

Loving you 

is what i do best

a single kiss 

should not be compared 

to

 

a thousand flying birds

the grace of the night

the hand at a lovers embrace

no these things don't come close to you

                        

Our sensitive touch 

has never came to an end 

your eyes compare

to nothing more than

to

A doves divine love 

stars eaten by the darkness

the cool chill that runs down the spine

my dear, your the beauty beyond the beast

my love for you 

is unlimited for centuries at hand

i shall die with you and make admins 

my love, you are nothing more to me than

everything

Reviews

[David E Navarro]

Okay, much better grammar and syntax in this one, made me appreciate it more, great thoughts of heart and well done.

I liked the format. It flows well too.

[smileyface123]

i love it. I don't care about the presentation, it was a good poem.

[J.]

I can't read it. The blue and yellow is distracting me and your picture in the middle is not good form. I can't believe how many people just give you fluff reviews. If this was published in a book the editors would not let you have every other line be yellow and the others be blue. The picture wouldn't be centered in the poem, it'd be off to the side. I like that you've finally written a sweet poem, however. Its a nice reprieve from your normal, dark and depressing items.

[Forest Green]

This poem is a kind and tender tribute to love and relationship...very nice!

Steel

[sarah]

This....is....so....stinking....SWEET! I love it I love how romantic it is! Amazing write!

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful and positive poem of love. Love support to be like your words expressed. I like the complete poem and set-up of color. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Day Dreamer]

It's fantastic. Keep writing! :)

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

A most pleasurable read...oozes love that is wonderful...each stanza is just so beautiful :)