Knights

everyone dreams for a knight in shinging armor but here is my verison

he stalks the night

as if it is his prey

and he is the blood thristy

 

he sees the stars

as if they have been together

for centuries

 

he waits the day away

he sees the light as a enemy

the world itself preys upon him

 

you see him as a nasty

unforgicin soul

but I

 

I see him as the

perfect verison of life

the world will never become

Reviews

[sarah]

This is really amazing breath taking actually great write!

[An owl on the moon]

You take the shadows and give them flesh, and here his life becomes a powerful force.. So vivid and stunning!

[.]

I am not sure where you were going with this ...the analogy of the night and knight is a really interesting concept and I think you could really taken this to another level...currently it doesn't gel for me..

[Linear]

He rides a white steed,
To your rescue he comes
But just who he is .........just what the truth is, well you will know in the end.

[The_Tom_Ward_Method.]

Oh wow. Very dark Marybeth.
I like it!
I see "him" as the very deffintion of gray. Neither good nor evil, but both.
Very blurred. Nice write.

[Allen Smuckler]

Makes you sorta wonder who "he" is...
but it is a devilish write..metaphorically speaking
allen