love for the Hate

love for eveveryoneis good

Love for the Hate

Poeple never stop the

namecalling and hatred

'tis  so thick I

can cut with a knife

love for the hate

is comin

the pain, the

suffering has yet

to admend

They pick and call    

on all

never to love or admire

They call me a lier

Love for the hate

is here

today, that no

one will back

a way

When they are hurting

everyone is scared

when they help

 anyone is ready for

the next victim

love for the hate 

has gone

away,no more

broken hearts

because,the pain

has gone away 

Author's Note

any grammer or spellin please! thanks

Reviews

[EMF]

A very emotive, pwerful poem. Like a strong slap. It really get's your attention and holds it. Yep There are some typo's. However some of them work wonderfully. Line 2 - People. Line 7 -coming. Line 14 - liar. Line 19 - away. And if four typo's are all you have to worry about, you have nothing to worry about.

[Antoñyo]

This was reviewed a year ago last? Wow, how's that possible?
This piece should be seen, considered, and appreciated.

Thanks for sharing

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Great poem, has emotional impact.. and really makes the point with so much power!!! Excellent :)

[Antonio Valentino]

when you allow someone to make you hate them, they have won...

Enjoyed this!
Antonio

[.]

LOL linear..anyway enough of that..Like the strength in the title..I suppose we all find it easier to see the negative in situations its our condition.

[Linear]

Hello Marybeth, grammar and spelling you can do yourself, don't be lazy, your poem shows great emotion, you write from your heart :0)

[sarah]

this is amazing I really enjoyed this great write!

[Allen Smuckler]

yup...but a terrific poem anyway
I will edit off site if you really want me too...but not here...in the mean time, know that I enjoyed the read...
allen