outside:)

my faith in the lord

Outside:)

 

It awaits me outside

day by day

night by night

I see it coming

But cant do a thing

about it

 

the birds dont hear it

the dogs dont see it

the world comes to a stop

they go on with out a doubt

Help them!

 

I see and watch and hear it

but cant do a thing about it

I watch Him come and take Us

But the rest die...........

And we are safe with Him!!

Author's Note

this is something that is going to happen wether you want it to or not so watch your llife and live, love life

Reviews

[David E Navarro]

Exceptional poem, well done, still needs a little editing help, but one of the best I've read from you in my opinion. Thanks for sharing this.

It sets up a nice surprise, it is engaging and draws the reader in. It has a very nice flow to it. You did a great job with this one. Hope to see many more like this.

Good work.

[Ruth]

To have faith is important and a fragile thing....whatever faith we all are :) Thought provoking write :)

[Linear]

Are you really quite sure?
I wonder who you see taking, and where you see them taken to, this is not explained within your poem? :0)

[Poetic Beauty]

This is a strong devotional poem. It is true. We must have faith in God.