Right

Right

A Poem by To Become Admirable
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Realizing the times I was to caught up in trying to be right.

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I knew everything about life
I had it all figured out
But so did you
Therefore we were both right

But always we thought the other was wrong
Harsh words on bitter tongues
But we were the only victims
Because we thought the other was wrong

Tears shed for the pain
And we blamed
Because we could not be wrong
We had been hurt by one another

Then life came and changed us both
We too late saw the damage we caused
The apologies never escaping our grasp
For now we realize we both were wrong

© 2018 To Become Admirable


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I love your writing so much also because i relate to it. Sometimes I get so prideful and even if i'm considering their opinions, i never considered their feelings and i'll only realize it at the end. It sucks a lot because sometimes apologizing is never enough.

Thankyou for sharing your writing, i admire how it translates from being right to being wrong. Please keep on writing, you're amazing :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

To Become Admirable

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much! I appreciate your words of encouragement and understanding. Sometimes learning th.. read more



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This is beautiful and relatable. I also am fond of how it serves a great reminder- if two people are different and right, there is no right answer, truly. Thank you for publishing this thought-provoking piece.

Posted 6 Years Ago


To Become Admirable

6 Years Ago

It warms my heart to know that my own experiences are relatable. For so long I was afraid to share .. read more
I love your writing so much also because i relate to it. Sometimes I get so prideful and even if i'm considering their opinions, i never considered their feelings and i'll only realize it at the end. It sucks a lot because sometimes apologizing is never enough.

Thankyou for sharing your writing, i admire how it translates from being right to being wrong. Please keep on writing, you're amazing :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

To Become Admirable

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much! I appreciate your words of encouragement and understanding. Sometimes learning th.. read more

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