White Lightning
A Book by Maddison Boys
 **NOT FINISHED** Dani wonders what the world would be like if we all didn’t perceive it like we do. She wishes to see the world as it truly looks. Follow Dani on her journey of perceiving life.  © 2013 Maddison Boys
Author's Note
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This is a rough draft of the story so please ignore how it bounces from place to place but please point out where. Sometimes when I'm writing I'm not sure if I already explained what I'm about to say or if I contradict already what I would like to say. I know that there will be a ton of grammar problems the only thing I truly need help with is comma splices so please help on that! What do you think of this book? Give me your honest opinion on it and please don't hold back any frustration that you have with it... Thanks
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Maddison Boys
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I'm a Junior in Highschool. I'm not a very experienced writer but I'm looking for somewhere that will give me a better experience. Whether it forces me to have thicker skin because of the criticism or.. more..
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