The First Lesson

My first post for writers cafe

I guess somewhere between I and Miss
before forever was invited
there was some imbalance
like chemistry
we were missing that positive charge

You had me wrapped up in your science
and through compliance I was hoping to share more then
the atomic number of 8
that we'd be able to mediate
maybe meet in the middle and share some ionic bonds

But it seems like we weren't covalent
because what was taken from you and I
well, that would lead us to history
and to understand the present we'd have to study the past
and while you want to stay lost in pages
I'm more focused on writing them

Author's Note

I have been writing for a while, now just want to get it out there in front of as many eyes as possible.

Reviews

[Blue]

Your first post for WC? Wow. I remember my first post was an overly elementary scribble I dared to call 'poetry'. Haha. This is gooood. I like the integration of 'chemistry' and the terminologies I abhorred way back in high school resurfaced. Ha! I missed them, though.

Cleverly written, Matt. I like your writing style. Keep it up, man!

[Matthew Bosko]

Thank you Blue! It means a lot coming from such a great writer like yourself.

-Matt

[Blue]

Naah, you don't know me yet. It's to early to call me 'great'. :) Thanks, anyway.

[Shay]

Haha this was pretty clever. Really interesting. It was nicely written. Keep up the good work! :)

[Matthew Bosko]

Thank you Shay!

[hmarieee]

i am not a fan of science but this is amazing. it is very interesting, great write.

[Matthew Bosko]

Thank you so much Hannahmarie! I actually was terrible at science...maybe that explains why my love life has floundered. haha.

[A. Amos]

this is interesting and mesmerizing piece, simply beautiful

[Matthew Bosko]

Thank you so much Amos, I look forward to being friends moving forward and reading your work.

-Matt

[A. Amos]

likewise Matt and you're most welcome

[maria ( rose)]

I think I'm gonna like this class..lol Your words are inviting and with it brings understanding. Looking forward to reading more of your work and would like to say with a friendly smile WELCOME!--
--maria

[Matthew Bosko]

Thank you Maria! I look forward to being able to learn and contribute to the community.
Thanks again for the review!

-Matt

[maria ( rose)]

your so welcome!! anytime:)

[Douglas Levi Gribbins]

I liked this piece alot, keep it up, you have a gift as i can see.

[Matthew Bosko]

Thank you Douglas, I appreciate the kind words.

-mB