Life

Life

A Poem by ~IlOvEcHrIsToPhErBuRnEtTe~

I sit and wonder

how can someone be so strong

but yet on the inside be falling apart

how can someone be so happy

but with hurt on their hearts

 

how they can fake a smile

and how everyone thinks theyr'e happy

but truth be told

nobody really knows whats going on

 

I sit and wonder what if

one could turn around

and relive the past

and fix their mistakes

 

could one just

love without the fear

of being  broken apart

and someone

ripping their heart

to tiny little shreds?

 

doesn't this make you wonder

cause it does for me

© 2009 ~IlOvEcHrIsToPhErBuRnEtTe~


Author's Note

~IlOvEcHrIsToPhErBuRnEtTe~
This doesn't really make all that much sense but I just been thinking lately. So tell me your honest opinion.

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Wow.. this is everyone's stuggle I believe.. we assess ourselves by looking at others.. and that is what you seem to have here.. when we are falling apart we need to build a sense of strength around us like a shield.. when someone fakes a smile.. it's cause they don't want to bring others down (my belief).. we never really know what others are going through.. unless we walk in their shoes.. people judge, rumour, lie... in an attempt to figure others out sometimes.. when it's not really there place to but part of being human.. all the inquisitions you mention .. they are all possible and DO happen.. we love even though we know it can temporarily cause us such pain if things go wrong.. only because we are human.. we are survivors.. we yearn and feel.. we just simply have to by need!!! Great writing in my opinion.. with questions many ponder from time to time! =)

Posted 15 Years Ago



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