loveaphobia

creeping in the dark

middle of the night

along comes true love

hidden within sight

 

it may never happen

it may just be a fear

but if it comes along

i will run away in tears

 

if you go through life

being threatened by the heart

of the most wickedest emotion

the one that will tear your heart apart

 

you will find life

is all just a risk

but its worth taking

its a mistake worth making

 

so when love gets you down

think of it this way

its all just a risk

that worth the take

 

 

 

Author's Note

i fixed this one, please review and make any critizism you think i need..

Reviews

[FANTASYKNIGHT]

yes, it sounds better now, good :), its different than other poems, and it stands out. i love and write alot of abstract poem and this is a good example of how you can divert the attentionvof the reader and put the spotlight on a different property of the same subject, and how you cxan create a different view of love, more sly and creeping, but all worth it in the end.

[Adela Muresan]

This poem displays great philosophy, but I think you could of chosen a different ending�it seems like a verse is missing in the end � try to add another one.

A.M.

[FANTASYKNIGHT]

Well, then true love already came creeping into my room, right now my life is a tragedy. anyway, i think it is pretty good, i've written a few poems with the same point of view as this.
A good one :)
One thing,
shouldn't it be "hidden 'from' sight". anyway, your choice. Ciao