february 8th

don't bullshit me

she said

i don't deserve that

and i'll apologize

and we'll find our places

 

 

Kurt said he'd rather we respected

than loved

but Kurt died alone

nothing but respect and books

 

 

you want rejection?

i've got plenty to spare

look into my chest

and take your fill

 

 

rip that smile off your face

it's time to get to work

Reviews

[Breezie Kae]

Nice poem, but it could use a little bit more.

[Wolfwind Words]

Somewhere between tradgedy and rage i'm thinking. 6th line i think you meant be respected. This runs deep with me as for a long time i would have rather of been respected then loved. I feel the frustrated torment that weeps from the lines in this. You have truly caught a moment in which man must ponder whats most important to them. Great work here! Thank you for sharing it with us all. I hope it causes people to think.