Our Stars

Love in waiting

Written it is in the book of heaven 

Our fates will collide 

Our loves will be intertwine .

But ... Life itself carried us on a different path .

Gazing and mesmerizing upon the sky above 

Each piled up dreams and desires ,

To be with the one , 

The other half of the star .

That make whole of our created star .

Which shine brighter when we are one .

Someday .

Til then ...

We keep searching and gazing on each other star . 

Reviews

[TheLostMind]

Fantastic. I loved every single line of this poem. The way you started this one was really good - "Written it is in the book of heaven
Our fates will collide
Our loves will be intertwine ." . Beautiful.
loved the optimism in this one. Made me smile. :)

[Mary Bradley]

Thank you The LostMind for your review :-) I appreciate it

[ANTO]

wow - thats a unique idea - a star halved ready to become whole when worlds collide in serendipity and the thought of two lovers far apart but gazing at the same sky - wishing the same wish is just breathtaking Mary Bradley. Your heart is an open book.

[Mary Bradley]

Thank you Anto for your kind review :-) ...I appreciate it . Isn't an open book heart is better than the close and misterious one ? LOL

[ANTO]

I can't disagree with your logic Mary :)
Your welcome

[Jamestown]

This is beautiful, great write. It reminds me of the old Disney song
somewhere out there, thanks for sharing.

[Mary Bradley]

Thanks Jamestown ... I hope it's a good song :-) ...I appreciate your review .