Our Stars

Love in waiting

Written it is in the book of heaven 

Our fates will collide 

Our loves will be intertwine .

But ... Life itself carried us on a different path .

Gazing and mesmerizing upon the sky above 

Each piled up dreams and desires ,

To be with the one , 

The other half of the star .

That make whole of our created star .

Which shine brighter when we are one .

Someday .

Til then ...

We keep searching and gazing on each other star . 

Reviews

[TheLostMind]

Fantastic. I loved every single line of this poem. The way you started this one was really good - "Written it is in the book of heaven
Our fates will collide
Our loves will be intertwine ." . Beautiful.
loved the optimism in this one. Made me smile. :)

[Mary Bradley]

Thank you The LostMind for your review :-) I appreciate it

[Christopher Casper]

A collision of love between two individuals can create a universe in and of itself. This is another gentle write full of wonder from you Mary. :)

[Mary Bradley]

Thank you Christhoper Casper ... glad you think so :-)

[Leviathus Fortes]

Each night I gaze upon the stars
Shining brightly in the sky
May they never burn out
May our love never die

[Mary Bradley]

Beautiful words Leviathus Fortes

[jacob erin-cilberto]

when those stars collide, hopefully there will be love.
and it will be fabulous...and shine through several galaxies...

[Mary Bradley]

Thank you :-)

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A most crafted and elegant piece, quite simple yet a powerful thought, collision to bring together emotion, well done, good read.

[Mary Bradley]

Thank you Thomas Fitzgerald for your review . I appreciate your kind words :-)

[Ov3R_sKiLl3D]

wow a beautiful written poem...... :)

[Mary Bradley]

Thank you very much for checking it out , I appreciate it

[A. Amos]

This is romantic and I love the feeling of the poem...well done my friend!

[Mary Bradley]

Thank you A.Amos

[Tks]

Two halves coming together to become one whole, shining being...just amazing. I believe that everyone has their true love out there waiting, it's just a matter of time and not giving up in love. Looking forward to more nice pieces of writing like this, Mary!

[Mary Bradley]

Thank you Tks for your nice words . I appreciate your review . ... yes I believe it as well , someday , some where , somehow :-)

[~]

Now, if there was a map
to guide me to your half star,
my angels- hurry! aide me!
need to find my other half... :)
Really nice poem dear Mary :)

[Mary Bradley]

Thank you Moonskittles :-) ... wish I know where this 'map' is . LOL

[~]

Hehehehe true that.

[Lavender Soya]

Hey Mary,

Well done! I love the figure of speech you chose to emphasize in your poem. :-)

[Mary Bradley]

Hi Lavender Soya ,
Congrats for your new badge !
Like always thank you for your review , you are very kind indeed :-)

[Lavender Soya]

Ditto! I saw you had a new badge too. Oh, don't mention it! I always enjoy reading your works. :-) Have a nice day!