Me

Faded Love

Disheveled with no desires 

My heart is too sick to love .

The sun sinking joylessly 

In the dark grey clouds.

I wonder ...

Where have the passions gone ?

Without a trace nor the last taste 

Freezing my blood flows ... Cold like a corpse .

My mind rewinding memories past 

To keep my body warm 

To remind me of how I've lived and loved 

To guide me to see the happiness in my beloved .

Will I be able to love again ? 

Reviews

[Nyu]

Beautiful, descriptive and it has that feeling that it comes from your inner world. Very sincere, showing raw emotion.

[Mary Bradley]

Thank you JELLYCAT :-) ... I appreciate your review

[Jamestown]

This world with all it's ups and downs overwhelming at times no doubt!
Cling to perfect love my friend and he will teach you to love again,
it tears my heart apart knowing you hurt, I will pray on it
and let the Lord do work! Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Mary Bradley]

Thank you Jamestown ... imperfect life we live in , there's joy and pain will follow suit

[Tomorrowneverknows]

I love your sweet and melancholic poem but these lines are extraordinarily beautiful:

"The sun sinking joylessly 
In the dark gray clouds.
I wonder ...
Where have the passions gone ?"

- Jesus

[Mary Bradley]

Thank you so much Jesus :-) ... appreciate you checking it out

[Tomorrowneverknows]

You're very welcome Mary!

[Christopher Casper]

This poem made me think strongly about my dealings and battles with depression. You have no room for love as you think you are unworthy to give or to receive it. It doesn't matter if the sun shines or the clouds dominate, the state of mind stays the same. When the depression stays constant, after a time you really do feel as though you've become a walking corpse. Many times your memories of who you used to be are the only way to acquire warmth. The words are very relatable here for me.

[Mary Bradley]

I am sorry for your darkest times Christopher Casper ... May you find solace and light everyday .read moreI am sorry for your darkest times Christopher Casper ... May you find solace and light everyday .
Thank you for checking it out :-)

[Cool Girl]

Love is interesting xD
I love this poem!!

[Mary Bradley]

Yes it is Cool Girl :-)
Thank you for loving it :-)

[Cool Girl]

You're welcome!!:)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

reminding me of when i was once warm...now my heart is cooling as if in a drawer at the morgue.

i like the alliteration and in line rhyme that flows in this piece.

sometimes in life we wonder if we will ever love again...i have felt this poem.

[Mary Bradley]

Thank you so much for your review Jacob Erin - cilberto :-)
Yes some of us never ceased wondering about it .... it's hard to hold on to a fickle thing called love :-)

[Jimmy Yetts]

Profoundly melancholy poetic reverie.
Lyrical, well-imaged and articulate.
Very fine work, Mary!

[Mary Bradley]

Thank you for your kind words Frankie J . I appreciate your review .

[Gee]

What a nice read,sweet Mary.If you get desperate just grab some dude off the street,use,abuse,dump.A stop gap until your Prince arrives!

[Mary Bradley]

Thanks Gee ... no worries the streets are safe from me . LOL
I think I'll stick to pen my desires as best I could :-)

[Gee]

You're welcome

[Lavender Soya]

The trails of personification is quite lovely. I would consider this a good read. Kudos!

[Mary Bradley]

Thank you Lavender soya for your review . I appreciate it

[Lavender Soya]

You're welcome. :-)

[Ngoc M. Nguyen]

This is very good--real and convincing in emotion and expression. Well done!

[Mary Bradley]

Thank you Ngoc M. Nguyen for the review ... I appreciate it :-)