Immortality

Time is forever,

but forever we are not.

I don't know nor willI ever,

why immortality is so greatly sought.

 

Life without death

is no life at all.

To breathe life's breath,
and not ever walk heavens hall.

 

We would not work with much determination

Should we have an amount of time untold.

Grasping life's sensation

that in your hand you now hold.

Author's Note

this one is a little different but they are all mine own poems i love hearing you input so please tell me what you think

Reviews

[None]

A greatly powerful message well told. I looooove your titles.

[babygirlz]

i couldnt of said it better

[bursting colors]

perfect way of putting it

[mariah]

so, so true my friend. i have felt this for awhile, but you have said it so perfectly, there is no way for me to even bother making a poem about this subject. great work!
-mariah

[T. Logan]

It's good. Really good. Life is a gift, but in a way, so is death.

[xEmix]

wow it's really good I love the rhyme scheme great job!

[Harley (arbiter)]

Again, beat me to the punch. Good though