Evil Gummibears

Human were becoming endangered. Evil gummibears were taking their revenge out on the human race for eating their children. Lyla and Brooke were on a mission to save the world from the dreaded gummibear army. Growing up in a deserted town, after their father died, they had tp take care of themselves. As adults, they were tough and able to make quick decisions. They decided to hunt down the gummibears. Soon they found they castle, and inside they captured the evil gummibear king. Knowing they would die if their connection with their king was broke, every gummibear rushed to the kings rescue. Prepared Lyla and Brooke had set up a trap to capture them all. They set up a chest and tied the king up inside. The gummibears all rushed inside to get him. When the last one was in Lyla and Brooke closed the door. They turned the key in the lock and walked away forever.

Author's Note

My friend Valerie helped me with this. I thought I'd post this just for kicks. Its amusing to me

Reviews

[Spookers]

this is funny. Sounds like some crazy kids story X3

[RachelReaper]

hahahaha, I love the theme of this story, very creative and fun to read! :)

[olla]

gummibears.. a sweet story.. could be expanded and there are some grammatical errors..

[Roasted Nipalis]

i am eating gummy bears right no hahah

this was a cute story! make more like this please!

[Androglossia]

Your story is very refreshing! Yours is the first ever that does not require brain-twisting analysis when it's time to leave feedback, well at least for me. I was glad they didn't burn the castle or else it will no longer fit the children's book category:)

Very simple, but makes readers smile:) The kind of story that is often overlooked.

[Chloe]

I'm hungry now... Awesome writing

[Xerclipse]

So this is the beginning of the end. The food becomes the predator. Interesting

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I wonder if humans taste as good to gummibears as they do to us? Hmm...

[Dean Kuch®]

Sounds as if the Gummi Bear Apocalypse has begun! Gummis eating humans and turning the tables on us...now that's an interesting (and delicious!) concept...

[Timeless-Chan]

ahah its so cute! it would probably be a really good childrens book! like a picturebook or something! So cute!