Even God Didn't Notice

d poem is self explanatory

On a fullmoon night,
When i lost sight,
Of the distant hut
Glowing lantern light;

Somewhere a voice called out,
Tone full of doubt,
Why was i leaving,
what is it about?

All i had, was a blank stare,
Wanted, but could not share,
Hoped He would realise
From my half moist eyes,
But, He whistled and passed by-
Never noticed why,
My face was not bright,

And i moved on into the night.

Reviews

[Candle in the wind]

This is a very special poem and I will cherish it because I am possessive about it. You gave it to me remember!

[Angelic Darkness]

I felt like you could have wrote more, elaborated.