My Wish

My Wish

A Poem by cherry

My love,
I wanna see
your smiling face.
I wanna hear
your sound of laughing.
And
I want to see
your convenience.
I do not wish to stay
beside you.
My only wish is
To fulfill your needs.

© 2010 cherry


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Nice thoughts, telling things exactly as they are. I'm puzzled by the switch from 'slang' (wanna) to more erudite English as the poem progresses.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Comforting words. But where is the supposed poem? :-|

Posted 14 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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