Flower and star

 

The little flower on the ground,

Is beautiful , calm and in happiness.

 

The little star in the sky above,

Is cool , sparkle and in brightness.

Reviews

[Emma Lee]

Awesome ;)

[Jibey]

There is charm in the simplicity of this -- the last line is captivating

[Snapdragon]

Two things very different yet equally beatiful and worthy. Lovely writing on this.

[Charles]

A lot of people say you can't compare apples and oranges - I say why not? One can compare their size, their shape, their biological classification (fruits) and contrast their taste, color, growth characteristics and so on. You've taken the next step by comparing/contrasting flowers and stars. Thanks for giving us something to think about.

[R E Tree]

This is beautiful yet it has a gentle peaceful tone. I really enjoyed this a lot it made me feel relaxed as I love poems about nature. I love flowers, the sea, the sky and the environment. This world is remarkable place to explore because the nature in this world is out standing

[Coyote Poetry]

You told the truth in your few words. A wise person can see the beauty in their life. A very good poem.
Coyote