In His Arms

Mist settled,as she stood

the withered leaves rustled,

her hair being caressed by the wind,

the coolness of which prickled her mind,

 

Peaceful ,it should have been , but rather,

her mind and soul were in the mood

for melancholic music,for she couldn't

enjoy the night's beauty encompassing her,

 

She was there , but not her soul or mind,

they were missing their mate ,a dull ache,

formed in her heart,as she longed for

her loved one's arms to envelop her,

 

Eyes closed, her mind began its work,

as the image of her lover came forth,

her frown turned upwards to a smile,

her heart skipped a beat,as familiar

butterflies fluttered inside her,

 

His eyes sparkling with a twinkle,

always left her drowning in its pool,

Although it was his lips,that made

her go crazy,with the sweet words,

and the music of his laughter ,left her

grinning from ear to ear,

 

As she felt his muscular arms enclosing her,

her mind,body and soul fell at peace ,

but a dull ache reminded her , it was surreal,

 

No it was real, her heart's palpitation rose,

as she opened her eyes slowly to meet his eyes,

There he was with his radiating smile , her love

reflecting in his eyes , as she buried herself in his arms,

 

the music turned soulful,her world filled

with radiant colors

everything was perfect,just perfect

as she stood there in her loved one's arms.

Reviews

[0AudreyClaire0]

This is fantastic! You did a great job describing the emotion in the poem. Awesome work. :)
-Aud

[Sleeping Maiden]

Awww, i loved this. Being in the arms of a loved one is one of the most comforting feeling ever. The warmth of the love..
This poem brought such sweet emotions. I enjoyed the read!
Great work!

[just is]

I like this, tugged at the heart, nicely written and expressed.

[may]

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