a heart's simple beat

Inside my city
You’re my electricity
My consistent beat

Specifically
I still insist it to be
Love’s persistency

What’s love? It’s to me
To share with felicity
and insistency

It’s simplicity
Beauty’s complicity and
hope’s consistency

Author's Note

haiku

Reviews

[Barbara Lynne]

I couldn't agree more...thank you for sharing...and thank you for your inspiring comments! Barb

[Hotwater]

A lot of efficiency in this conspiracy of words. Clever stuff.
*bird*

[stars are far]

this is so nice ..

[Sukriti Suki]

This is nice....the rhyme is very very creative and appeals to the reader...love lasts for infinity....

[OT]

a great extended senryu here! I also applaud your rhyme type scheme or structure here I think it's very clever - the ABC in all of them - it really brings them together as opposed to them being more distant - very clever write!! nice!

[Richielee]

nice work here : )

[Amber Betty Marie Child..]

that is what it is!
how eles would a poem be so well circled together