We will never be

We will never be

A Poem by once upon a time

I thought I could be your friend
Closer than sisters
Could ever hope to be.

But then we came to a road with a bend
Our whole lives pulled up by a twister
Spun around, then dropped to the ground
We'll never be who we used to be.

I'll still think of you now and then
How we'd always say sisters before misters
How I'd pick you up
Whenever you fell down
But you just left me to fall
We will never be
What, perhaps, we never were.

Perhaps it was time to end
To late to mend
What could never have been
Maybe we were half sisters
Or maybe i never needed a sister
We were never bound
At the hip or knee
I guess, we will never be
What, perhaps, we never were.    

© 2013 once upon a time


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yeah, this is really touching.
nice expressing of emotions =D

sometimes friends can make you so happy and yet so sad



Posted 11 Years Ago


i agree with PurpleQuartz, "i guess, we will never be what, perhaps, we never were" is an amazing line that ties everything together. This shows both sides of the story beautifully without saying "she said, she felt, she was"
Great write

Posted 11 Years Ago


'I guess, we will never be
What, perhaps, we never were'
These lines were really clever! It was filled with loss and a sense of sadness that you wrote in words very well!! Great write!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


once upon a time

11 Years Ago

Thanks that means a lot!
Sad sorrowful

Posted 11 Years Ago



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