No way out

No way out

A Poem by once upon a time

It's never ending,
The fear and sorrow.
Slowly dying,
No way out.

I'm scared,
I'm trapped,
I have to get out,
No way out.

They keep you locked inside,
Keep you hidden.
Black walls made of stone,
Must escape,
No way out.

Sword of stone,
Keeps you hidden.
Tried to escape,
Didn't get out.
Now it's to late,
I found my way out.

© 2012 once upon a time


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This was lovely, the last line really set it off! Great work.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Sometimes there's nothing but harsh reality, that's what I get here and I like it! Good job!

Posted 11 Years Ago


once upon a time

11 Years Ago

Thanks I'm glad you like it
ohh its really beautiful but a little bit sad and pessimistic

Posted 11 Years Ago


once upon a time

11 Years Ago

Thanks. I know my poems definitely are sadder. I don't know why but that's just what tends to come t.. read more
Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )

11 Years Ago

you know if i review every poem i ever wrote , i think i would say the same, but i am trying to be o.. read more

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