No way out

It's never ending,
The fear and sorrow.
Slowly dying,
No way out.

I'm scared,
I'm trapped,
I have to get out,
No way out.

They keep you locked inside,
Keep you hidden.
Black walls made of stone,
Must escape,
No way out.

Sword of stone,
Keeps you hidden.
Tried to escape,
Didn't get out.
Now it's to late,
I found my way out.

Reviews

[PurpleQuartz]

This was lovely, the last line really set it off! Great work.

[Inda]

Sometimes there's nothing but harsh reality, that's what I get here and I like it! Good job!

[once upon a time]

Thanks I'm glad you like it

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy..]

ohh its really beautiful but a little bit sad and pessimistic

[once upon a time]

Thanks. I know my poems definitely are sadder. I don't know why but that's just what tends to come to me. It's kind of impossible for me to write a "happy" poem.

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

you know if i review every poem i ever wrote , i think i would say the same, but i am trying to be optimistic and hoping that there is a day that will come soon to shift my writing to the world of happiness and joy , what is the value of life if we can't feel happy once at least, be optimistic who knows maybe then every thing would be different :)