This is the end

This is the end
I can't take it anymore
This is the end
No more shall i cry
The end for all
Shall I take you with me
The one who caused me pain
The end for you
I love you no longer
The end for me
I love me no more

Reviews

[The Nameless]

I find it hard to write short poems, but this one is really good. It says a lot in little words.
And the last line just tops it off - "I love me no more".

Great job, keep writing =D

[once upon a time]

Thanks :)

[Tex]

wow scary stuff here. I am from the USA we have a saying here about what happens when someone acts out the sentiments in this poem... Going postal. The most recent case took out a whole class room of 5-6 year old children.

that said I thought if viewed from an exercise write, you really got inside the head of one of these mental cases and expressed the sentiments they hold dear very well. so... very good job.