Touch of Crazy

All about mad love :) Dedicated to my husband... he gets me!!!

I want to stab you in the heart, to inject my love directly.

I want to peel the skin from your body and wrap myself in it. 

I want to taste your brain, pump lust through your veins. 

I want to lay you on the kitchen floor, and dress you up in oysters and escargots.

I'd love to cook you in a gourmet meal and serve you at my dinner parties.

I want to drain your blood and put it in my locket.

Pluck your eyes out from the sockets, and make the last face you see, be me!

 ;/

I'm going to squeeze you tight until your vision gets hazy.

I want to love you fierce and with a touch of crazy.

Reviews

[Trevor]

Your use of imagery is great. I love dark love poetry like this. Just a few things I could mention. "I'd love to cook you in a gourmet meal and serve you at my dinner parties" seems a little casual compared to the other lines. The line "I want to love you fierce and with a touch of crazy" could also maybe be reworked. "Touch of crazy" is in this weird spot where its enough of an understatement that it seems out of place, but not enough of an understatement to be clearly purposeful and ironic.

[∂αʌ<..]

wow...this is indeed crazy...like obssessive love and possession!
seduction
possession
obssession...
i love it...especially how you associated food into it...i would say you cooked an excellent gourmet dish!
Delicious!!!:):):)

Really great and dark poem.. loved the different descriptions... they really express a fierce Love...

[Ruth]

To hold and savour all that can be savoured and held lol In a potently unique manner! Excellent!
xx

[Fontane Wong]

I love how the way you use different description to describe how you love. The imagery was brilliant and fantastic. The levels of how you love is rising from one level to another. I feel a bit creepy and dark while there's a sense of sweet and romantic. The sentences are not weak but powerful and strong. The emotion is so great. I love this poem so much that the title of it attract me till the very end of this poem. A really favorite piece from you now. An absoulutely masterpiece.

[Ashli The Amazing]

amazing imagery [: i absolutely loved it. very dark, descriptive, and enjoyable.

[Coyote Poetry]

I like this poem. No weak sentences in this poem. Direct and powerful emotions. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Coffee Vampier]

wow very vivid Imagery, I seriously though you wanted to stab someone in the heart!

[Short.Nerd]

Wonderful imagery. I really liked this piece. In a way it was creepy yet a little sweet. lol. Kinda crazy to. Excellent job!

[Rene Velez]

really cool write great imagery, the words just jump...