The Strangling of Letting Go

Resisting letting go...

Woefully melancholic,
Passionately wondering,
Mournfully cantillating,
Gaunt thin love,
Wondering imparting
Collywobbles.
Ceaseless wishes,
Aspirations of optimism,
Promise expectancy,
Clasping hope as an amarantanthine vow,
Ought to let go…
But no,
Hold on.
Yes.
No.
But…
I simply don’t know.
Sighs.

Author's Note

Please give me some glow points (what I did well) and some grow points (what I can improve upon.) Thank you!